Tuesday, March 31, 2015

Olivia the fairy princess
Olivia the fairy pig princess is a big drama queen and also has a very creative mind. This morning Olivia has been talking to her dad about all sorts of things.

She has tall ears, about 11 centimeters high, little button eyes, big snout with a little triangle at the end, chubby cheeks and an enormous smile that almost touches her eyes. She has short skinny legs and  short arms. She likes to wear fashionable clothes.

Olivia is a big bossy  drama queen, she acts like she knows everything and tries to boss everyone around.  Olivia likes jumping up and down and getting all the attention. Olivia has a very wild imagination

She is so slow when it comes to getting ready it takes her at least 20 minutes just to get ready for school. Her family loves her bossiness because it makes them laugh. When Olivia makes it to school each morning she dances and prances around the corridors like a fairy princess. During school, Olivia is a monkey she is always telling people what to do and causing trouble. She dances everywhere !!!. But  always has an answer to everything if the teacher asks a question.  Olivia is always the first person to put her hand up.  

So what do you think of Olivia? do you think she is a funny pig?
well I think she is funny even though she is bossy.

I liked doing this because it is encouraging me to write straight after hearing something. Next time I think that I could describe some things a little bit better.

1 comment:

  1. Megan, I really like your comments as they give an honest reflection on your writing.

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